I’m thrilled to welcome such a multi-talented lady into the attic this week. Christine Eyres not only has a gift with words but is also a very accomplished artist. In this post, Christine tells the story of her Scottish great-grandmother, Agnes, a courageous woman whose legacy might have been lost to history but for Christine’s research.
‘Agnes refused to let me go. She demanded that her story be told, that I investigate further.’
Originally a teacher, Christine Eyres studied art at WA Institute of Technology (now Curtin University) and worked as a visual artist in WA and Queensland. She developed a passion for writing while undertaking post-graduate studies at James Cook University. Research for an exhibition and a thesis about the mother/daughter relationship led her to write a creative non-fiction work, The White Apron. Christine self-published this, but is now redrafting it into fiction.
Christine’s second manuscript, Dark Enough for Stars, was long-listed for the 2015 Mslexia Novel Prize. She’s now re-working that story, which portrays the far-reaching consequences of the forced separation of children and parents.
You’ll find more of Christine’s art and writing on her website.
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WRITING WITH AGNES
It was never my dream to become a writer. I wrote from an early age but, to my mind, never well enough. It was finding Agnes that set me off.
As a kid from a country town I seemed to drift through school, missing many of the basics of English. I was brought up on a diet of broad Glaswegian accents and a dialect that none of my friends understood. Perhaps this was the reason spelling completely escaped me. Despite the despair of my teachers, I managed to make it to tertiary level. I do remember writing a story set in my hometown of Albany and a lecturer urging me to submit it to a magazine. I dismissed that idea as barking mad. I now wonder at the lack of confidence in that girl that made her reject the lecturer’s encouragement.
Later, as a visual artist, I wrote—probably very bad—poetry. Not that I cared if it was good or bad. I wrote to identify and condense my thoughts and feelings and hopefully find metaphors that would feed into my artwork.
Eventually I undertook post-graduate studies, which involved mounting a solo exhibition and writing a thesis. What to choose as a subject? My supervisor wisely steered me, over several sessions, away from wanting to tackle the whole gamut of the female condition to an investigation of the topic at a more personal level. I came back to her, in trepidation, with: The Mother/Daughter Relationship.
‘That’s the one,’ she said, pointing her pen at me and gazing over the top of glasses that always sat halfway down her nose.
I went home in a state of benumbed dismay. My relationship with my strong, clever mother had been complicated. How to even start? When I picked myself up, I sensed I needed to go back through the matrilineal line. I needed to trace the source of attitudes and anxieties that were passed on through generations of women in my family. These women had lived through the industrial revolution and the clearances: the forced eviction of thousands of small tenant sheep farmers, which brought upheaval and misery to much of Scotland. Thousands of families had to leave the crofts they had occupied for as far back as anyone could remember. The land was enclosed and stocked with sheep to supply wool for the mills and factories that sprang up in the cities.
During my research I discovered a fact that shook me. My genteel, Victorian grandmother, Christina, had been born in a poorhouse. How the hell did that happen? It was then that Agnes popped her head up and said: What about me? And I realised that I knew nothing about my matrilineal great-grand mother. She had only been spoken of in one story that portrayed her, towards the end of her life, as something of a hero. We knew the stories about the great-grandmother on the paternal side of the family, how she came from Glen Coe in the romantic highlands of Western Scotland and spoke only Gaelic. How she was over six feet tall and was thought to have descended from the Vikings.
‘I could almost swear that several times, when I came to a dead end, Agnes tapped me on the shoulder and pointed the way.’
Agnes led me to see that what had happened in Scotland during the latter half of the nineteen century was anything but romantic. The overcrowded cities saw as many as fifteen people living in a one-roomed house. Disease and the capitalists were the only things that thrived. What I uncovered in Agnes’ life’s story started to help me to understand the hang-ups and anxieties that were apparent in our mostly female family. It was a time when I finished the artwork and the thesis, but Agnes refused to let me go. She demanded that her story be told, that I investigate further.
I travelled back to Scotland and spent two months following Agnes around. I am not usually given to fancies (as my mother would call them), but I could almost swear that several times, when I came to a dead end, Agnes tapped me on the shoulder and pointed the way. I found the estate outside Edinburgh where Agnes had lived in one of the cottages. Hers would have been a life of hard work but one full of security and peace as the ploughman’s daughter. It was after she married that her life descended into indescribable poverty, including being reduced to the poorhouse.
Shortly after their marriage, Agnes’ soldier-husband was pensioned from the army with an eye disease contracted in India. From being a proud Gordon Highlander stationed at Edinburgh Castle, he returned to his father’s profession as a cobbler and the evidence seems to say he sank into depression and the dram shops. It was a time when alcoholism was endemic in the clotted slums of Scotland. It was a time when any sense of community was hard to maintain but the class system was strengthening. There was an opinion, promoted by church and state, that the suffering of the slum dwellers was due to their moral failings. To be poor became a deeply shameful condition, and I believe the tears of this shame washed down through the generations.
‘To be poor became a deeply shameful condition, and I believe the tears of this shame washed down through the generations.’
Over the years seven children were born, and four died. Agnes and her family moved from the squalor of Edinburgh to the degradation of the tenements in Glasgow. Resilience must have been tested in an age deemed the slaughter of the innocents, due to the number of young children who died of typhoid, tuberculosis and a myriad of other illnesses relating to appalling working and living conditions. When her eldest daughter died of consumption, Agnes took in young women banished from homes because of the disease. Her home became a refuge for these girls whose fate would have been prostitution or starvation.
By the time I pieced together Agnes’s story as a creative non-fiction, I had a tome of 150,000 words. I received some encouraging feedback, but to be published it needed to be shorter. Wanting to keep the integrity of the story for future generations, I decided rather than chop events, names and dates, at this stage I would self-publish for my family. After taking a break to work on another novel, I have now set about condensing and converting the story into a more fictionalized account.
At a time in my life when I frequently travel to visit my scattered family, I am grateful to Agnes for leading me to writing. Besides being enormously satisfying, it is wonderfully portable.
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What a fabulous and inspiring story, Christine. Agnes is palpable even here! Thanks for sharing what you have uncovered about the ripple effects of her life through to yours.
Best wishes for the rewrite!
Jacquie
I agree that Agnes feels so real, even from these short snippets. And it’s true that the actions of generations past ripple through to the present. Thanks for visiting, Jac. xx
Oops, sorry about the late reply. I didn’t realise there was a comment section. Thank you for your kind comments.
My apologies for not letting you know you could comment, Christine. I must make a note to tell all future writers that they can comment if they wish. 🙂 xx
So pleased to read about Christine’s journey. would love to read her story. Is her ‘Writing with Agnes’ original story available to buy or will we have to wait for the fictionalised version? As Australians we all come from ancestry which began in another country and the stories that are filtering through are fascinating to read about. Thank you Louise for bringing Christine to the Attic.
I’m not sure if ‘The White Apron’ is available for sale or not—hopefully, Christine will see this comment and answer your question.
I agree that our ancestors’ stories are fascinating—they often explain a lot about the present.
Thank you for visiting today! xx
Thanks Deb
I gave copies of the rather badly edited first version to family and friends. I am glad i ket the whole story in tact for family history but it is a bit long and dour.
What a wonderful story, sad, but amazing to read. I resonate with the value in realizing how our past influences the present. We (hubby and I) are in the process of researching our lineage and find great comfort in recognising family traits and occupations that make sense with who we are and how we live today. We are about to embark on a month of travel through Scotland and northern England checking out places linked to our ancestors. A month seems hardly long enough, but we are glad of the opportunity. Thank you, Louise, for bringing Christine’s story and journey to us.
You can never underestimate the ripple effect of past generations on present ones, whether it be genetic or cultural or just habits and behaviours. I talk about the ‘ghosts’ of my ancestors being present in every room as I grew up, and what a strong presence they were, although as a child I didn’t understand all of that.
Your month in England and Scotland sounds fantastic! Good luck with it all and I hope you discover lots about your family history as you go!
Best wishes. xx
Good luck Eileen, I can vouch for the fact that it is an important and satisfying thing to do.
A wonderful story, thank you. I look forward to reading the novel. I love the origins of your story, the Scottish setting, and the compassion and realism of the light you shine on the terrible conditions a proud people were reduced to living in, through the cruel and rapacious actions of capitalists and rulers. More of these stories need to be told. And it seems that Agnes was indeed a hero, giving shelter to young women who otherwise would have died on the streets.
It never ceases to amaze me how many stories there are of women who lived seemingly ordinary lives, but who really did courageous and life-saving things. I hope more of them are brought to life, too, Christina. Agnes is a hero in my book, too! x
Yes, many stories of the poor and under classes do not become known but I was lucky enough to come across some wonderful, albeit horrifying accounts, of the slums of Edinburgh and Glasgow by doctors of the day.
An inspiring journey Christine. You have motivated me. I have recently started a Diploma of Family History. After reading your post I’m going to be delving deeper and not get distracted x
No, don’t get distracted, Rae! What a joy it will be to delve into all that history! x
Great, I hope we see your work one day. thanks to Louise for forming this network where people can stay in touch.
I loved Christine’s story of her journey as a writer and her story of Agnes. The places and the life of Agnes are real without melodrama or sentimentality. I found myself inhabiting her space; the streets, the homes, the people, the smells and the smoke. Keep writing Christine.
Thanks for visiting, Val! You’re so right—Christine has really brought her great-grandmother to life with her descriptions. It’s a great example of evocative and beautiful writing. 🙂
OK you lot, I’m starting to get a big head now. No , you are prodding me to get it finished.
Yes, we are prodding you to finish it! Sounds like you’ll have some readers ready for when you do! 🙂
What a truly inspirational guest post — thank you Christine (and Agnes!), and thank you for sharing, Louise. I simply must comment on the beauty of Christine’s prose. Her words are so effortlessly readable and the imagery precise and evocative. I would love to read more about Writing with Agnes.
PS The artwork in the background of Christine’s photo is magnificent! 🙂
I love Christine’s writing and style, too, Maureen. And her art! A very talented lady. Thanks for visiting. xx
Thank you all. You have given me the confidence to keep on keeping on.
That’s lovely to hear! Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece. 🙂 x