As a writer, it can be difficult to be objective about your own writing and to see the strengths and flaws in your work. It can be even harder, once you have spotted the faults, to know how to correct them. 

We’ve all been there, lost in a forest of words, knowing there is something awry but unable to put our fingers on the actual problem. 

External eyes can provide that objective perspective: they can spot an overwritten scene or a plot hole or where the story has gone off on a tangent. In other words, they can see the wood on the trees, as well as the overall view of the forest and possible pathways through it. 


I can be another set of eyes.

When it comes to storytelling, I am particularly skilled at developing character and story. I also love the music of language and am a grammar pedant. 

Due to the personal nature of writing, I understand how hard it can be to hear negative feedback, and I treat every author and their manuscript with respect, sensitivity and, of course, confidentiality. 

I am happy to appraise fiction (commercial or literary), non-fiction and memoir, but not speculative fiction, childrens’ books or poetry. 


1. A close reading of your manuscript, particularly looking at:

Order and cohesion of story
Plot gaps and bumps
Character development and consistency
Pacing, tension and maintaining reader interest

2. A page-by-page annotation of your manuscript in Track Changes

3. A summary report with suggestions and tips

You may choose to add a meeting via Skype to discuss. (See below for cost.)



1. Proofreading: I am not a qualified editor and, while I can comment on language and grammar, this will not be a line-by-line edit.

2. Fact-checking.



1. Completion of a short questionnaire to ascertain what you want from the appraisal and ensure I am able to provide it. 

2. The agreed number of words/chapters. (See below for rates.)

3. A one- or two-page synopsis of your work-in-progress. (Dot points are fine.)



Two weeks from receipt of manuscript for appraisals up to 10,000 words and four weeks for longer.



Please send your manuscript as a Word Document with double-spacing and standard margins, in a twelve-point standard font (e.g., Times New Roman, Droid Serif). Number the pages and include a header with your name and the title of your work. 


RATES (Excluding GST)

< 3,000 words                                                   $150
3,001 – 10,000 words                                     $250
10,001 – 25,000 words                                   $400
>25,001 words                                                  Request Quote

QUERY LETTER                                                 $175
SYNOPSIS (up to 2 pages)                            $250
QUERY LETTER + SYNOPSIS                        $350 

60-minute meeting via Zoom*                   $100 

If you choose a shorter initial appraisal of your manuscript and request a longer one within six months, the cost of the first appraisal will be deducted from the cost of the second.



Single one-hour meeting via Zoom* and reading 10,000 words prior to session:   $350

Six one-hour meetings via Zoom*, reading 10,000 words prior to each session:     $1,890



For more details, see here.


*All meetings will be conducted via Zoom during the corona virus outbreak

Full payment is needed prior to commencement of the appraisal/mentoring.

If you are interested, please contact me for more information.